Okay so this is the video i am handing in for devleopment for creative practice, excpet its in 720p not SD WS i have the same video just scaled down for the actual hand-in. There ar enotes below about the little problems and such:
As in my notes theres a few things i don't like, mostly are caused by render times being so high i cannot fix them in time.
Firsly, theres the jump at the start of the animation, my render crashed on me first tiem roudn and i somehow chnged the camera angle of the shot. I have treid rendering the first 10 frames again but i cannto match the camera angle, and i have no tiem to re -render as it took 3 solid days to render.
The second is the lack of light on the character. I like the start and the lighting on him as he steps foward and he goes inot shadow, but i think i will setup a new light further for him to step into again further down the corridor in my final CMP render.
Theres also alot of re -texturing to do, once i can get my hands on some texturign help, part of the problems is my uv's too i cna unrwap but not well enough. Any help on these is appricated.
Finally i would like to add some extra bells and whilstles, I htoguht of light rays through the bars of the prison window on the P.O.V shots just to add some extra visual stimulation.ALso bear in mind sound isn't done yet, and there will be a guard ovice to try and explain the shot further.